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I Loved You Deeply – A Tanka

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I loved you deeply

Only to be cast aside

As I showed my age

Tossed away like an old shoe

Worn thin by many miles

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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8 responses to “I Loved You Deeply – A Tanka”

  1. Heartafire Avatar
    Heartafire

    I love this.

    Reply
    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you very much. :)

      Reply
  2. chowanyau Avatar
    chowanyau

    yep know the feeling, traded in for 10 yr younger model… what was i but domestic slave and ‘surrogate’ mother, babysitter …bitter moi?

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      It is sad, no one should ever have to be treated that way. I know they (whomever “they” are) say that “what goes around comes around”, but sadly I’m never around to see it happen.

      Reply
      1. chowanyau Avatar
        chowanyau

        me neither. I am skeptical sometimes. I see ‘bad’ people prosper and keep going strong and the ‘good’ die young or suffer. Well not all but too many.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
        Dom DiFrancesco

        Unfortunately this is the way it has always been and will likely always be, sad, but true.

  3. Tracesofthesoul Avatar
    Tracesofthesoul

    This is so sad:(

    Reply
    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      I find it sad when this happens and unfortunately it happens far too often.

      Reply

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