Dom DiFrancesco

Musings of an Aspiring Author and Poet

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The Pregnant Sky (Haiku)

in

The pregnant sky falls

Bringing evening into the world

~~ Another day dead

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~~ Dominic DiFrancesco ~~

 

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12 responses to “The Pregnant Sky (Haiku)”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar
    Charles Yallowitz

    Pregnant sky is an excellent phrase. Really creates some odd imagery.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      This comes from the odd way that my mind works sometimes. I was questioning whether to use it and then I figured why not.

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      1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar
        Charles Yallowitz

        Glad you decided to do it. Love poems like this.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
        Dom DiFrancesco

        Thank you, I’m glad I did it as well. :)

  2. Mirada Avatar
    Mirada

    I love the first 2 lines.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you very much Mirada.

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  3. Roxi St. Clair Avatar
    Roxi St. Clair

    Beautiful Dom :-)

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you very much Roxi. :)

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  4. words4jp Avatar
    words4jp

    These are some interesting metaphors you have combined;)

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      The first line just came to me and I went from there. I know it is a rather odd one. :)

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      1. words4jp Avatar
        words4jp

        i like it – very unique. the statement is strong.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
        Dom DiFrancesco

        Thank you my friend, I appreciate that. :)

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