A Brothel Of Sorts (A Dirty Little Poem)

A brothel of sorts–

This cesspool of words

Each a whore waiting for its next trick.

Johns–

Sentences,

Paragraphs,

Stories,

Poems,

Cheap and dirty,

Looking for a little love and affection.

Through the two-way mirror

Voyeurs read the filthy act;

Drooling over each thrust of the pen,

Until the climax

When the page collapses

In its ink soaked ecstasy,

Ah…such a sweet release.

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

Comments

22 responses to “A Brothel Of Sorts (A Dirty Little Poem)”

  1. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Saw this story earlier… wonderful idea :)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Sue, I’m glad you liked it. :)

  2. augustmacgregor Avatar
    augustmacgregor

    Wow!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Not quite as dirty as the title leads one to believe I suppose. :)

  3. field of thorns Avatar

    Dominic, so clever, I love it! Wonderful and witty!

    Warm wishes,
    Pepperanne

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Pepperanne, I appreciate that. :)

  4. fitwomanforlife Avatar
    fitwomanforlife

    very clever

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, I suppose the title is much dirtier than the poem. :)

  5. writersdream9 Avatar

    Wow! Powerful stuff!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you, such weird things go through my mind sometimes. :)

  6. ShelbyCourtland Avatar

    I absolutely LOVE this one!!

    “However, I still feel ‘cheap and dirty’!” *wink*

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Me too…I was blushing while I was writing it. I’m really glad you liked it. :)

  7. J Avatar

    Well now!
    I may need a bucket of ice to cool off….!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Maybe…it’s the cleanest dirty poem that I could write. :)

      1. J Avatar

        Aw, let ‘er rip, Dom ;)

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I think I will, I had fun with this one. :)

      3. J Avatar

        Have been toying with the idea myself for quite some time … but … like the Lion on the Wizard of Oz — no courage. o.O

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        :)

  8. scottishmomus Avatar

    Ooh err! I feel all voyeuristic now. :)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you, I really had fun writing this one and I’m glad you liked it. :)

  9. mihrank Avatar

    wonderful idea – I believe I read or saw similar story!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      This one was just bouncing around in my head so I figured why not put it to paper and see what happens.

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