Salvaged Hearts Still Beat (Tanka)

Salvaged hearts still beat
Slower and more cautiously
Afraid to be hurt
What else would be expected
After being left for dead

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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6 responses to “Salvaged Hearts Still Beat (Tanka)”

  1. Kurt Brindley ✍ ✄ ✍ Avatar

    Wow, this is good…

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Kurt, I appreciate it.

  2. J Avatar

    Ouch! That last line really packs a punch —!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thanks Jen, I appreciate that.

  3. Seafarrwide Avatar

    so true

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank true. :)

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