50 Word Story – Good As Dead

There is nothing, but darkness ahead thick, black and cold.  I can hear the growl of the demon that is tormenting me inching ever closer.  Stumbling, I fall cracking my head on a rock.  I can taste the blood as it trickles across my lips…I’m as good as dead.

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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9 responses to “50 Word Story – Good As Dead”

  1. Maha Khan Avatar

    Amazing

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much.

  2. laurelwolfelives Avatar

    Dark and twisty….I love it. :)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Laurel. :)

  3. mandibelle16 Avatar
    mandibelle16

    Scary story but very well written. Must have been difficult to do it in 50 words. You did it well :)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      They are more difficult than they appear…50 words isn’t a lot that’s for sure. :)

  4. Book Club Mom Avatar

    Scary!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you. :)

  5. the scribbler Avatar
    the scribbler

    See my story!

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