A Dark Trip

By D. R. DiFrancesco

Sour feelings troubling and deep,

Twisting emotions dark hidden,

I know not where these notions I keep,

They come, they consume the life I’m living.

To try and break the hold, the strangle,

Fruitless and wearying as I revolt the demon,

Senses and emotions left bloody and mangled,

Begging sleep to lead solemn dreaming.

For this I hope the obsidian cloud rises,

Paving way for spirit lifted,

Lock away my despondent guises,

To be thankful for all that I have been gifted.

Comments

5 responses to “A Dark Trip”

  1. kikischeuer Avatar

    Truly Awesome piece!!

    1. blackandwrite Avatar

      Thank you so much. I am glad that you enjoyed it.

  2. melodylowes Avatar

    That dreaded obsidian cloud… appreciate the honest emotion behind these words.

    1. blackandwrite Avatar

      For some unknown reason, I was feeling a little depressed that day and this is what came to me. Thank you for taking the time to read it. :)

      1. melodylowes Avatar

        Those cloudy days come and go for all of us ‘poetic’ types – part of the necessary angst which draws out our deepest hearts, I think. Life is only properly recorded if ALL of our honest emotions are expressed – so those ‘down’ times can also be beautiful as we learn to allow the feelings out! :)

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