Dom DiFrancesco

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Thin Ice – Haiku

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Credit - timemanage.com
Credit – timemanage.com

An icy skin forms

Far too thin for ice skating

I’d fall through and drown

~~ D. R. DiFrancesco ~~

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4 responses to “Thin Ice – Haiku”

  1. daydreamdaisies Avatar
    daydreamdaisies

    I love how you manage to capture such raw emotions in your haikus, a poweful story in a small package! This piece is one of my favourites, chilling in its beauty!

    Reply
    1. blackandwrite Avatar
      blackandwrite

      Thank you very much, its so nice of you to say.

      Reply
  2. yepiratehere Avatar
    yepiratehere

    http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.se/2013/03/carpe-diem-137-usurai-thin-ice.html might be interesting!

    Reply
    1. blackandwrite Avatar
      blackandwrite

      Thank you very much for sharing this. I did read it and enjoyed it very much.

      Reply

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