Godless hypocrites
Plague this world in their God’s name
Unleashing hatred
Are these demons not in sight
Ripe for justice to be served
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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
Godless Hypocrites – A Tanka
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15 responses to “Godless Hypocrites – A Tanka”
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Powerful words. Love it.
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Thank you very much Charles, I appreciate that.
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Intense
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Thank you very much WB.
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liked this Dominic, but it is another tanka, not a haiku :) lol
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My mistake, I was thinking about a haiku when I typed the title. :)
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Unfortunately, too true. I’m sure their God is shuddering at His name being slapped on such awful things…
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I am sure that He is. I find some of the things to be done in God’s name to be so terrible, take the Boston bombing for instance. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem Melody. :)
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I do, too! And no problem, Dominic…
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Ooooooh! What a resounding smack! Good one!
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Thank you Eric. :)
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I like Eric’s comment – good smack!
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Thanks, I thought smack was appropriate, good choice of words. :)
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Far far too many of those around.
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Yes there are, but I don’t think they are going away any time soon.
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Dom DiFrancesco 
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