Otherworldly – A Tanka (In honor of the tornado victims)

Otherworldly

The skies swallow up heaven

Leaving destruction

Wizard of Oz…a movie

This is Moore, Oklahoma

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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10 responses to “Otherworldly – A Tanka (In honor of the tornado victims)”

  1. L. Marie Avatar

    Beautifully written. Sad thing is I thought about The Wizard of Oz too. The reality of a tornado is anything but entertaining. A tornado hit my apartment building several years ago and carved a path of destruction in my area. Nothing on the scale of Oklahoma though. But it is a scary reality.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much. I have no personal experience with tornadoes (only hurricanes), but I am in absolute awe of the power of nature and am sad for the tragedy that the people of Oklahoma are having to go through. I just can’t imagine it.

  2. sexinthekitchensink Avatar

    Reblogged this on sexinthekitchensink and commented:
    Wow-this poem says so very much in just so little words. Very profound.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much and thank you for the reblog. This one came to me this morning as I was watching the continuing news coverage of the tragedy. It is such a sad thing to see.

      1. sexinthekitchensink Avatar

        You just somehow managed to find the most fitting words, in such a short poetic form to do the tragedy some justice. It was well-done.Very sincere,

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Thanks again. :)

  3. Lucid Gypsy Avatar

    I thought of Oz as well, the images from Moore are dreadful.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      They sure are, as I mentioned, I have never been through a tornado, but I really can’t imagine how helpless one must feel in the face of all of that power. It is so sad.

  4. Thinker Belle Avatar

    Follow the Yellow brick road
    Ignore the goading toad;
    Fly high into the sky
    Await daylight and receive God’s Blessing-
    It’s a jungle out there!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you and wonderful words, I really love it. :)

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