Dom DiFrancesco

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First Love – A Tanka

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First love of the heart

Naive possibilities

Unrepentant joy

Ignorant of the danger

Until it has been shattered

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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7 responses to “First Love – A Tanka”

  1. Saunved Avatar
    Saunved

    And you couldn’t have said it better! Loved it!

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you very much, I so glad that you enjoyed it. :)

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      1. Saunved Avatar
        Saunved

        :-) It was beautifully written. I had to!

  2. Charles Yallowitz Avatar
    Charles Yallowitz

    Love really is a battlefield and everyone’s armed with rocket launchers.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      I never thought of it that way (at least the rocket launcher piece), but I think you might be right. :)

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  3. words4jp Avatar
    words4jp

    you hit the nail on the head – pounded it!

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Sometimes every love is like the first one and when they end it is liking hitting your thumb with the hammer. :)

      Reply

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