You

When writing of you

Perplexed am I to the form.

No mold can contain you.

So much of life is a Parody,

Laughing at your ingrained silliness,

The mischievousness of your smile,

Twinkling eyes with a smoldering fire.

Haiku’s genteel nature is far too small,

Sister Tanka tries to express,

But her attention is much too short.

Perhaps an Ode would suffice

For flattery is your just due,

Ensued by inevitable embarrassment.

I could venture to sum your essence

Through the singularity of an Acrostic

Though this would scarcely scratch the surface.

Perhaps Triolet would be more fitting,

For none too often can I express the depth of my love;

Repetition surely would serve as reminder.

Even with all these

None can capture your unrestrained spirit,

The flow of you through space and time.

I will not try to confine you, that would be unfair.

Instead I will let you spread your wings

Writing your own verse

In the form of…

Free.

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

Comments

14 responses to “You”

  1. Genie Avatar
    Genie

    Delightful!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much.

  2. RoSy Avatar

    Love it!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you RoSy, I’m so glad. :)

  3. words4jp Avatar

    Wow. This is adorable. I think you should introduce your own form – we will call it the Domaiku! Yes. What you write – regardless of form is just perfect because each piece you write is a part of you.

    Domaiku. I like!!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Now that is what I call a compliment, to have a poetry form named after one is quite an honor, very nice. :)

  4. busymindthinking Avatar

    Your writing is nothing short of incredible!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Belinda, that is so nice of you to say. :)

  5. Lucid Gypsy Avatar

    Love it!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you my friend, it is mush appreciated. ;)

  6. far but not away Avatar

    Very nice! While reading I was thinking of “vers libre” and the poet you are created the perfect end to that poem. :)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, I’m so glad that you enjoyed it. :)

  7. Lead Our Lives Avatar
    Lead Our Lives

    Love-ly.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much. :)

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