The Trance

Rain fell torrential and strong

Thunder clapped and lightning struck

Reminiscent of Stoker won’t be long

Unless God grants us a little luck

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Lightning flashed ‘cross blackened sky

Through gothic windows cast shadows eerie

I hope and pray I do not die

In castle dark on this night so dreary

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Surely my mind must be playing tricks

These things I see must not be real

A touch of flu, I must be sick

For if I’m wrong then my fate is sealed

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As shutters bang in wind and rain

A winged creature I thought I saw

With eyes glowing red am I insane

Rush I must, the curtains draw

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A bang, a scratch on windows glass

I hide my face in fear a dream

A few long seconds the sound did pass

Minutes though it surely seemed

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Then silence befell the musty room

A nightmare dream it must have been

Escape this place, this horrid tomb

Uncovering my eyes I turned a grin

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Lo’ I find I am not alone

In shock I stumbled and couldn’t speak

Fear on my face I must have shown

Evidenced by wrinkle of widows peak

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Eerie white and dressed in black

This fiend of fiction now stood before

I must admit I was taken back

Turning to run for bedroom door

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Faster than a blink he blocked my way

In fear I trembled where I stood

Not a sound or word did he say

Under his cloak and silken hood

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Then he scoffed deep and dark

The room took on a ghastly chill

Deadly silence no cricket or bark

A scream did emanate cold and schrill

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Frightened I fell on bended knee

His putrid breath upon my neck

The room went dark I could not see

On whole of my life did I reflect

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Grasping tightly with claw-like fingers

Hoisting me like a childs toy

Growing intensity my terror lingers

My heart and soul he seeks destroy

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In a moments notice warmth I feel

A peace then fire runs through my veins

The slightest pinch in fog concealed

Monsters fangs they cloud my brain

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I feel and smell the blood-soaked cotton

A trickle down my trembling arm

My wound it reeks of flesh gone rotten

Life is held in mortal harm

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Again a laugh born of Satan’s Hell

Rings as unreal in dreary dream

My will to live dissolved in his spell

Nothing exists but him it would seem

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This oddest of feeling from head to toe

My body and soul no longer of this world

Allegiance to him now must I show

Though why or how my thoughts he unfurled

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He spoke in a tongue unlike my own

Though strangely understood by chance

You’ll never escape, I’ve returned you home

To eternity lived under Dracula’s trance

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

Comments

25 responses to “The Trance”

  1. annotating60 Avatar

    Don, that was quite a ride. You had me in suspense the whole way. I wasn’t expecting vampires until the very end. Surprise! Good narrative line. Great read! >KB

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, I so glad that you enjoyed it. :)

  2. words4jp Avatar

    Oh my – this is incredible. Just incredible. I love the Dracula-ish-ness of it. Very cool – you should reblog this on Halloween. ;)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I could do that or maybe I will write something new in honor of All Hallows Eve, why not. Thank you for the nice compliment Kimberly, you know how much I appreciate it. :)

      1. words4jp Avatar

        Oh please do – please;). I bet you will be smashing!

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        We will have to wait and see. :)

  3. Imelda Avatar

    That was scary. :-) Well done.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much. :)

  4. Lucid Gypsy Avatar

    Really good, it put knots in my tummy!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I’m very glad, but I hope that the knots come undone rather quickly, I’m sure they can be uncomfortable. :)

  5. cozyblanketsnowflakerepetitioncompulsion Avatar

    How did you know I was just about to pick up my copy of Dracula! I love the Gothic imagery you have used. Like a Poe poem the reader is inclined to devour the lines faster and faster with adrenaline pumping!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I happen to have Stoker’s Dracula sitting on the shelf right next to me, I just love it as well as Poe. Thank you my friend.

  6. jrosenberry1 Avatar

    How delicious — the creatures of the night, they call to thee! Mwah ha ha ha!
    Loved this — loved it!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I’m glad that you liked it, I suppose that I could have waited until Halloween, but I just couldn’t help myself. :)

      1. jrosenberry1 Avatar

        Hey, I’m not complaining… Vampire away!!! ;)

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I think I will, thanks Jen. :)

      3. jrosenberry1 Avatar

        :D

  7. Heartafire Avatar
    Heartafire

    This is fantastic! Love it, you need to write a book! My best, Heart

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Heart, I have a couple books started, but I just have to focus on them to get them completed. Someday soon I hope. :)

  8. busymindthinking Avatar

    What an incredible piece of writing!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much. I don’t write this type of poetry too often, but it is one of my favorite genres.

  9. halftangible Avatar

    … Um… wow. o__o that was awesome.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much, I glad that you liked the poem. :)

  10. Wendell A. Brown Avatar

    Dom, your poem was written so very well. I really enjoyed reading it my friend. Thanks for sharing and Gob bless!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much Wendell, I glad you enjoyed it. God Bless you also my friend.

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