Does the Summer Cry (Tanka)

Does the Summer cry

Mourning for it’s own demise

As its spirit falls

Buried under Autumn’s reign

It awaits solstice rebirth

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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9 responses to “Does the Summer Cry (Tanka)”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Excellent question. This year summer seems to be going down with a fight, so I don’t think it’s crying. Though, I wonder if the first rain of spring is the sign that winter has given up.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Oh, that is possible, the first rain may mean that winter has given up, I hadn’t thought of it that way.

      1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Honestly, it came to me as I was writing the comment.

  2. ioniamartin Avatar

    I do wonder about whether or not the seasons notice the passage of time. I wonder if the trees feel naked.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Not nude trees, I guess we will have to start rating mother nature XXX. :)

      1. ioniamartin Avatar

        Oooh…don’t look at the bark!

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I will try not to. :)

  3. busymindthinking Avatar

    I believe summer knows it returns; taking joy in what autumn has to offer, a supportive friend. Grin

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thanks Belinda, I believe that you are right. :)

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