Don’t You Ever Learn (Epistle)

WDBWP Monday Poetry Prompt #22: What Would You Say to You?

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I

Don’t you ever learn

You spent our childhood always trying to please others

But where did that get you

What about pleasing us

What about it

II

Our teen years weren’t much different

Still trying to please the same people

Ignoring what we wanted

You acted like some kind of martyr

I don’t remember anyone asking for it

III

We had things we wanted to do

Sports, career, dreams that should have been a reality

And what did we do

We didn’t follow through

We ignored our own desires

IV

Whose fault was this

It was nobodies but ours

To blame anyone else would be a lie

We didn’t stand up for what we wanted

So shut up and deal with it

V

Its nice though that we finally wised up

At least a little…maybe

We didn’t turn out half bad

We got smart and realized we missed her

And did something about it before she got away for good

VI

She’s put up with us now for over 24 years

And hasn’t killed us yet

Although we probably deserved it

A long time ago

We can be high maintenance you know

VII

And our children

What can we say

Thank God, the stars, dumb luck that they are great kids

The greatest treasure we could have asked for

A blessing if there ever was one

VIII

I’m thankful that they didn’t turn out like us

Well–At least not entirely

They did get some of their mother’s traits

Mostly the good ones…quiet she might be listening

Really, they don’t know how lucky they are

IX

After all is said-and-done

We should be happy with how things turned out

Family is what is important

In spite of us we are doing pretty darn well in that area

A loving wife, wonderful children and a comfortable life

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

Comments

15 responses to “Don’t You Ever Learn (Epistle)”

  1. high five and raspberries Avatar
    high five and raspberries

    24 years = awesome..you can’t be all that bad ..lol

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I guess I’m not, she still loves me after all this time and we are still happy, pretty rare in this day and age I suppose. :)

  2. Kaufman's Kavalkade Avatar
    Kaufman’s Kavalkade

    I stuck you in my blogroll widget Dom. You might eventually see a click here, maybe. That would be a huge percent of my traffic, so I’m helping ya out.;)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much, I really appreciate your support it means a lot to me my friend. :)

  3. Sahm King Avatar

    Stanza IV hit me hard. This piece is…wow, Dom… Sorry, I know that’s pretty whack, but wow…

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Sahm, I wasn’t sure if I did the Epistle correctly, but either way thanks for the wow I take it as a tremendous compliment, I really do. :)

      1. Sahm King Avatar

        I don’t think there’s one correct way to do it, from what I’ve read. I mean, it’s not very…formulaic. I think it’s in the manner of speech itself and, on that, I think you’ve pulled it off quite nicely. I’m trying to write one of these and I don’t think I’m quite there yet.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I think the topic made writing this one a little easier. Lets face it, who knows us better than us. Thank you for the great prompt Sahm.

      3. Sahm King Avatar

        Thank you for your participation, Dom. :D

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        It is all my pleasure Sahm. I’m finding the prompts inspiring. :)

  4. Lucid Gypsy Avatar

    I expect you speak for many of us!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Sorry if you got a comment that was for the wrong person, it was purely by accident. Anyway, thank you for the nice comment, I’m sure that I am not alone in my life experience. :)

  5. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

    Great piece!!! wow! wisdom does come with age! :) Namaste

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much, I would love to think so although there is always more to learn. :)

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