Supernatural (Tanka)

Supernatural

Souls lost between provinces

Unable to leave

Reliving their earthly hell

Trapped in the netherworld

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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18 responses to “Supernatural (Tanka)”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Makes me feel sorry for wandering spirits.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Me too, I happened to be watching a few of these types of shows prior to writing this. I happen to have an interest in this type of thing.

      1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Me too. I hate being scared, but I love reading ghost stories. Go figure.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I think it is just human nature, this interest in the supernatural. I wouldn’t say that I love to be scared either (maybe a little), but I am fascinated with the possibilities that these things exist among us.

      3. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Maybe with ghosts, the idea stems from existing after death.

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I believe it does. :)

  2. pi314chron Avatar
    pi314chron

    Dom, one of your best! Does the poem consciously reflect Chinese cultural/religious beliefs and/or superstitions of earlier times? If not, could you give us a little background for the poem?

    Thanks!

    Ron

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Ron, this one was a little less complicated than that. I happen to love reading and watching anything having to do with the supernatural as does my youngest daughter. We had just watched a few shows on this topic and I decided to write the poem in response. I do write quite often on spirituality and religion in general, but this one was not intended to be as deep although it does draw on varying religious beliefs. Thank you for asking and I’m glad that you liked the poem its very nice of you to say.

      1. pi314chron Avatar
        pi314chron

        Dom, the “back story” of your poem is very much appreciated. The poem itself bears an eerie resemblance to many of the religious beliefs and happenings in “A Time of Ghosts,” by David Coomler. I have no connection or financial interest in the book; I’m just a very satisfied customer and reader. Warm Wishes — Ron

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Thank you Ron, I will check out “A Time of Ghosts” it sounds like something that I would be very interested in. My best wishes to you as well my friend. – Dom

  3. ioniamartin Avatar

    Sometimes I feel like this. personal limbo.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I suppose that we all do at times. I hope you have been doing well my friend. :)

  4. Roxi St. Clair Avatar

    ::::hiding under my bed now::::

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I’m sorry I didn’t mean to scare you. :)

  5. words4jp Avatar

    doo doo doo doo ….Twilight Zone theme – doo doo doo doo…… I doth find supernatural occurrences very freaky!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Darest I say Bwaaa Haaa Haaa fair maiden, of course I probably did the whole Bwaaa haaa haaa thing wrong as well. :) Love the Twilight Zone as well, great show if I sayeth so myself. :)

  6. RoSy Avatar

    Ohhh – fitting for the season…I LIKE!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you RoSy, a little light reading for the season. :)

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