The tender shiver
From an early snows caress
Like first kiss passion
Stoked with anxious excitement
Culminates in inner peace
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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
The Tender Shiver (Tanka)
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8 responses to “The Tender Shiver (Tanka)”
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I really like the way you word your content. Great piece.
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Thank you WB, I appreciate your kind comment.
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Gosh that’s nice!!
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Thank you very much my friend. :)
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Thank you for the reblog, it is much appreciated.
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Reblogged this on Poetry by Pamela and commented:
I have come to love the tanka. And this is a great example.-
Thank you so much Pamela, I love them as well and as you know they can be harder to write than they look. :)
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