Given any choice
It would be no choice at all
You would be the one
Though we are separated
My heart chooses only you
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~~Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
Given Any Choice (Tanka)
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23 responses to “Given Any Choice (Tanka)”
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I like this a lot
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Thank you Pamela. :)
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Reblogged this on Poetry by Pamela and commented:
I really like Dom’s poetry. You should follow his blog and enjoy it too-
Thank you so much for the reblog my friend, I am honored.
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Thank you for the reblog my friend, as always it is appreciated. :)
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I am really digging on the first two lines. Perfect intro.
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Thank you very much, I appreciate that. :)
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A touching one, it makes me think of my son and his wife who have long seperations when he is at sea.
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I’m glad, it is hard to be away from someone you love for long periods of time, but it can also be a blessing making the reunions all the more special. Thank you my friend.
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This is a beautiful poem. Think this is really the day to think of such things.
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Thanks Charles, I thought so, I am trying to return to the true meaning of the days. I am so disgusted by the commercialism of today that I’m finding it necessary. I hope that you and your family had a wonderful Thanksgiving. :)
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We had fun, but the toddler had a fever. So, it was a low key event. Today was just relaxing with a friend to gather my energies for a busy weekend.
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Sorry for the late reply Charles, its been a busy holiday weekend. I hope your son is feeling better and I’m glad that you got to relax over the holiday, we all need that sometimes.
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The little guy is doing much better. Been busy with the book debut today. Hoping tomorrow eases up enough to let me write a bit.
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You can only do so much, anyway I hope things settle down a bit for you so that you can get back to writing. Don’t let the stress of the book debut get to you, I’m sure that it is nerve wracking.
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It was more a lot of work to get all the advertising stuff out. Now, I have to stop checking my numbers every 10 minutes.
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I can understand even though I haven’t personally been through it. I would probably do the same thing checking every 10 minutes. Really that is the only barometer of how well the book is doing. Hang in there the season is young.
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Thanks. Looking good so far, but the poor second book is developing a Middle Child Syndrome. I’m guessing it will get a mid-month boost.
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Lovely poem. Reminds me of how I feel whenever my husband and I are apart.
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Thank you very much, same with my wife and I, I suppose that this is how it should be when we are separated from people we love.
So poignant. I love this piece. I feel it in many ways. xx
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Thank you my friend. :)
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