Our Hearts Fade to Black (Tanka)

Our hearts fade to black

When compromised by a love

Leaving them broken

This isn’t by our design

But by our God given flaws

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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6 responses to “Our Hearts Fade to Black (Tanka)”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Very powerful. Really holds a lot of pain in the words.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Charles. :)

  2. Lucid Gypsy Avatar

    Particularly sad Dom.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you my friend. :)

  3. words4jp Avatar

    very thought provoking – very true.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Kimberly. :)

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