A Raging Storm Brews (Tanka)

A raging storm brews

Devastation follows me

Like Typhoon Haiyan

I battle good and evil

To survive another day

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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10 responses to “A Raging Storm Brews (Tanka)”

  1. words4jp Avatar

    We all battle these two sides – you strong – your good will prevail

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I certainly hope so, if not I will go down trying. :)

  2. Mirada Avatar
    Mirada

    Oh wow, isn’t that familiar–well done!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much my friend. :)

      1. Mirada Avatar
        Mirada

        You’re most welcome–do you enjoy the tanka form as much as I do, or do you prefer free verse?

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Actually I love writing tanka and have probably written more tanka than any other form.

      3. Mirada Avatar
        Mirada

        Yep, we’re kindred souls, alright.

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I think so. :)

  3. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

    Sounds like my shift last night…geat tanka!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much though I’m not sure that it is a good thing that it reminded you of your night shift. :)

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