To Feel The Night (Haiku Series)

Warm–moist is the breeze

Accompanying the buzz

~~ Mosquitos draw blood

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A blood moon eclipse

Is this the sign of end times

~~ An infrequent visit

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Shadows in the night

Tend to breed anxiety

~~ There’s nothing to fear

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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Poetry Prompt Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie – Heeding Haiku With Ha: To Feel The Night

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17 responses to “To Feel The Night (Haiku Series)”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Ugh. Nearly forgot about mosquitoes. Always causing trouble.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Yes, I grew up with these little monsters and I can honestly say I don’t miss them one bit.

      1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        They’re all over the place in the summer. Strange thing is that I rarely saw them in Florida.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        That is surprising, although as many times as I have been to Florida, I can’t say that I remember them being a real problem, weird.

      3. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        I was told once is that they put sulfur into the water, which prevents the mosquitoes from laying eggs in most of the ponds and lakes. Though it makes the water smell a little.

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I never heard that, but I know that it would drive me away so why not the mosquitoes. :)

      5. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        The water did have a slight sulfur smell before it was cleaned for human use. Such a strange place.

  2. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    You provide a surreal image of the night in the last haiku… clear images, with a sensory and emotional touch. Well done. :-)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much my friend, I appreciate your kind words. :)

  3. Blog It Or Lose It Avatar

    Very well done! I’m glad you did this prompt – !

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Me too, I enjoyed doing it very much. Thank you Jen. :)

      1. Blog It Or Lose It Avatar

        You’re welcome!

  4. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

    Oh wow, Dominic, I love this…there is something mysterious about this blood moon. I missed it the night of due to rain and cloudy skies but the following night the moon was huge!!.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I’m so glad, I loved writing them. Thank you my friend. :)

  5. Bastet Avatar

    Great haiku Dom…though I do so hate those little vampires ;-)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      So do I, they really are quite the little blood-suckers aren’t they. :)

      1. Bastet Avatar

        yes indeed! ;-)

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