Pinpoint Moon (Shadorma)

Pinpoint moon

Celestial eye

Keeping watch

Up above

What could be more beautiful

In all the heavens

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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Poetry Prompt Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie – Bastet’s Shadorma Photo Prompt #4 

April 20, 2014

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11 responses to “Pinpoint Moon (Shadorma)”

  1. mindlovemisery Avatar

    Beautiful Shadorma!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much.

  2. Bastet Avatar

    Good one…I like the way the shadorma is taking on a haiku quality…beautifully written.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank my friend, I really do love writing this form. Thanks for introducing it to me. :)

      1. Bastet Avatar

        You’re so very welcome and we’ll both thank Yves! ;-)

  3. readinpleasure Avatar

    This is beautiful! :-)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so very much, I’m glad that you think so. :)

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  5. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

    Whatever form you try, it reads so nicely, Dominic!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you my friend, that is very nice of you to say. Sorry for replying so late, it was a very busy weekend.

      1. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

        No problem…hey, life gets in the way of our reading and writing some time {grins} hope you are well.

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