Filleted Flesh From Bone

Filleted flesh from bone

Cut by separations blade

My love so distant

Pain so intense I’m in tears

Draining blood from heart and soul

When will my wounds mend

When will tears finally dry

When will torment end

Reuniting with my love

Never again torn apart

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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11 responses to “Filleted Flesh From Bone”

  1. Lyrical Treasure Avatar

    Dom, for a moment there I thought you were talking about fish fillet.

    And then things got very deep and I got carried away by the emotion in your words. Very vulnerable!

    I nice one.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you, I could talk about filleting fish, but I don’t think it would have the same impact. :)

  2. Julian Froment Avatar

    Wow, Dom. This is absolutely incredible. I love this.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I’m very glad Julian, thank you so much. :)

  3. lumar1298 Avatar

    Love can hurt, but can also be very satisfying…

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Most definitely, no argument here.

  4. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
    Jeremy Nathan Marks

    I appreciate how you make this anguish of separation physical, Dom. That is very powerful.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Jeremy, this is one of those that sort of came out of nowhere. I’m very glad that you like it.

      1. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
        Jeremy Nathan Marks

        I do. The ones that come out of nowhere are always pleasant surprises, aren’t they? :-)

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        They certainly are, I find this happening more and more and I can’t say that I am unhappy about it. :)

      3. Jeremy Nathan Marks Avatar
        Jeremy Nathan Marks

        That’s great. I think that is what we want as writers and artists. :-)

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