Dom DiFrancesco

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I Am Like Water (Tanka)

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I am like water

Soft and pliable yet strong

Moving with the tide

Always going with its flow

Until I meet destiny

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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7 responses to “I Am Like Water (Tanka)”

  1. Parmis Avatar
    Parmis

    Beautiful!

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you so much. :)

      Reply
  2. Tracesofthesoul Avatar
    Tracesofthesoul

    Nice Tanks and you sound like a real nice guy:)

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you so much. I like to think that I am, I know that at least my wife thinks so. :)

      Reply
      1. Tracesofthesoul Avatar
        Tracesofthesoul

        Well, hey! can`t get better proof than that!

  3. Charles Yallowitz Avatar
    Charles Yallowitz

    Very well said. The second line is my favorite because it really captures the power and feel of water.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you Charles, I’m glad you liked it. :)

      Reply

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