Dom DiFrancesco

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Waters Flow Freely (Tanka)

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Waters flow freely

Ever flexible, formless

Yet so powerful

Should we not live as water

Molding to life as it comes

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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11 responses to “Waters Flow Freely (Tanka)”

  1. Tracesofthesoul Avatar
    Tracesofthesoul

    Now that would be nice.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Indeed it would and I truly believe it can be. :)

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  2. writersdream9 Avatar
    writersdream9

    That’s the way to take this life slow and flexibly! Love your work!

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you very much, this one I wrote as much for me as everyone else, I was in need of a little spiritual infusion. :)

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      1. writersdream9 Avatar
        writersdream9

        I understand that for sure!

  3. Heather's Starting End Avatar
    Heather’s Starting End

    Best Tanka ever :)

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you very much Heather, I’m very glad that you liked it. :)

      Reply
  4. Mike Avatar
    Mike

    Very pleasing sounds when read aloud – well done.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you Mike, I’m trying to get more in touch with my spiritual side. :)

      Reply
  5. Blog It Or Lose It Avatar
    Blog It Or Lose It

    Very, very beautiful!

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you so much Jen, I’m glad you liked it.

      Reply

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