Give From A Full Heart (Senryu)

Give from a full heart

As if life depends on it

Because it just might

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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12 responses to “Give From A Full Heart (Senryu)”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Great advice.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Hopefully is a bit of a pearl. :)

  2. yeseventhistoowillpass Avatar
    yeseventhistoowillpass

    Very Zen like!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Namaste my friend. :)

  3. harulawordsthatserve Avatar

    Succinct and so true. I think life does depend on exactly that…H xxx

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      As do I, it is a hard thing to do at times, but it is critical.

  4. writersdream9 Avatar

    It just might! :D

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I’m pretty confident that it does. :)

  5. psychopathsgetbored28 Avatar
    psychopathsgetbored28

    ‘Because it just might’ – the perfect end to an excellent thought, it’s lovely how that line gives the meaning and shows the ‘dependence’ of the first two lines in the last one, hence, justifying the meaning. Splendid!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much. Finding the correct ending is the hardest part for me, I’m glad that is appears it worked.

  6. martha0stout Avatar

    Save someone’s life while you save your soul.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      That is the hope though giving must be done without the expectation of getting in return. :)

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