Dom DiFrancesco

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Innocence Murdered (Tanka)

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Innocence murdered
Answer…get another gun
Thinking it deters
There is no logic to this
It’s a Mexican standoff

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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6 responses to “Innocence Murdered (Tanka)”

  1. Nicholas C. Rossis Avatar
    Nicholas C. Rossis

    Wonderful! And poignant…

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you very much Nicholas.

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  2. charlypriest Avatar
    charlypriest

    “a Mexican standoff”…nice ending Dominic.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thanks Charly, I wasn’t sure if it was a politically correct phrase, but then I figured why not…it fit. :)

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      1. charlypriest Avatar
        charlypriest

        It fitted perfectly with the theme.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
        Dom DiFrancesco

        I like to think so…thank you my friend.

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