January 6, 2015

Archer Stands Ready (Tanka)

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Archer stands ready

Arrow nocked, bow fully drawn

He’s poised for the kill

Huddled I stay out of sight

For fear I’m Cupid’s target

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Poetry
Tagged: afraid of love, archer, Cupid, Cupid’s arrow, love, lovers, passion, romance, tanka

5 thoughts on “Archer Stands Ready (Tanka)”

Tracesofthesoul says:

January 6, 2015 at 2:33 pm

Lovely “haiku” moment on that last line…awesome!

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- Dom DiFrancesco says:
  
  January 6, 2015 at 4:33 pm
  
  Thank you very much my friend. 🙂
  
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writersdream9 says:

January 7, 2015 at 6:39 am

🙂

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Oscar Alejandro Plascencia says:

January 7, 2015 at 6:56 pm

Very nice Dominic.
I love this one.
I live for the final twists.

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- Dom DiFrancesco says:
  
  January 8, 2015 at 12:40 pm
  
  I’m glad, thank you so much Oscar and a Happy New Year to you. 🙂
  
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