Dom DiFrancesco

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Man’s Eyes Deceive Him (Tanka)

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Man’s eyes deceive him
When under a woman’s spell
They say love is blind
Who would I be to argue
For I am truly bewitched

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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9 responses to “Man’s Eyes Deceive Him (Tanka)”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar
    Charles Yallowitz

    Good save at the end. ;)

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thanks, I wouldn’t want to get in trouble with the fairer sex. :)

      Reply
  2. Yoshiko Avatar
    Yoshiko

    Women’s eyes also deceive her

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      They certainly can. :)

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      1. Yoshiko Avatar
        Yoshiko

        Yea :( deceived by the sweet talker no actions nasty men.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
        Dom DiFrancesco

        Only sometimes. :)

      3. Yoshiko Avatar
        Yoshiko

        Most of the times :) I have been hearing that

  3. RoSy Avatar
    RoSy

    Hocus Pocus ;)

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Indeed. :)

      Reply

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