Musings of an Aspiring Author and Poet

Flaming Orange Clouds (Haiku)

January 21, 2015

Poetry

Flaming orange clouds
Soft and inviting overhead
Sorbet of the sky

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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21 responses to “Flaming Orange Clouds (Haiku)”

Pamela Beckford

January 21, 2015

I would love to see this with a graphic

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1. Dom DiFrancesco
  
  January 22, 2015
  
  I thought about that, I was driving when I saw this sky and didn’t stop to take a picture. It was truly amazing. :)
  
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Laura

January 21, 2015

Beautiful image.

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1. Dom DiFrancesco
  
  January 22, 2015
  
  Thank you very much. :)
  
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words4jp

January 21, 2015

sounds tasty – were you hungry when you wrote this? :)

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1. Dom DiFrancesco
  
  January 22, 2015
  
  Actually I wrote it just before bed, I had seen the most gorgeous sky while driving home from work and this just came out of that. :)
  
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  1. words4jp
    
    January 22, 2015
    
    ;) it is lovely.
  2. Dom DiFrancesco
    
    January 26, 2015
    
    Thank you Kimberly. :)
  3. words4jp
    
    January 26, 2015
    
    You are always so very welcome.
Lucid Gypsy

January 21, 2015

I love this one!

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1. Dom DiFrancesco
  
  January 22, 2015
  
  Thank you very much, something a bit lighter than the normal fare. :)
  
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writersdream9

January 21, 2015

Vivid wording!

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1. Dom DiFrancesco
  
  January 22, 2015
  
  Thank you very much Carol. :)
  
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richardlowellbryant

January 21, 2015

Sorbet of the sky. I do like that image.

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1. Dom DiFrancesco
  
  January 22, 2015
  
  Thank you Richard, I appreciate that. :)
  
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Cheryl-Lynn

January 21, 2015

Oh my, sorbet of the sky…very nice!!

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1. Dom DiFrancesco
  
  January 22, 2015
  
  Thank you very much Cheryl-Lynn. :)
  
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Joan

January 21, 2015

“Sorbet of the sky”…perfection

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1. Dom DiFrancesco
  
  January 22, 2015
  
  Thank you very much Joan. :)
  
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Heather’s Starting End

January 22, 2015

Yummy visual, Dom :)

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1. Dom DiFrancesco
  
  January 22, 2015
  
  Thank you Heather, I appreciate that. :)
  
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