Passionate Courtship (Haiku)

Passionate courtship

Two songbirds blinded by love

Windowsill tango

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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16 responses to “Passionate Courtship (Haiku)”

  1. Cheryl-Lynn Avatar

    Ah gee that is so darn lovely!!

    twist of passion, gentle turn
    feather touch with loving chirps

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Well thank you Cheryl-Lynn, how nice of you to say. :)

  2. words4jp Avatar

    A little Fernando’s Hideaway on the windowsill. How sweet;)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I tried to be at least a bit cute with this one. They really are quite funny to watch. :)

      1. words4jp Avatar

        ;)

  3. Yoshiko Avatar

    Will they wake up from their blindness and commit?

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I suppose in some cases yes, if the person is right and they feel it down to their souls. If it is just infatuation, that passes and the two are likely to part company.

  4. Yoshiko Avatar

    Reblogged this on Moral Value Story and commented:
    This is a good analogy of every couple blinded in love. Once the blindness is gone, will they commit to each other?

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much for the re-blog Yoshiko, I truly appreciate it. :)

      1. Yoshiko Avatar

        Most welcome :) Dom

  5. readinpleasure Avatar

    Lovely haiku!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you, a bit lighthearted I hope. :)

  6. RoSy Avatar

    Awww..Lovely :D

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you RoSy. :)

  7. Tiny Avatar

    So sweet! Vividly painted, I can see and hear them.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, I was hoping to paint a bit of a picture. :)

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