The Passage of Time (Senryu)

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The passage of time

Only man feels its effects

Because he watches

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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19 responses to “The Passage of Time (Senryu)”

  1. words4jp Avatar

    This is clever. I love the use of the word watch;)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you…actually in all honesty that happened accidentally, but I liked how it worked. :)

      1. words4jp Avatar

        Sometimes accidents are pretty cool events;)

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        They certainly are. :)

  2. Jen Avatar

    both moving — and clever!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thanks Jen, I appreciate that. :)

      1. Jen Avatar

        Very welcome :)

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        :)

  3. ramaink Avatar

    Oh! So true!! What a lovely nugget of truth!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much. :)

  4. atothewr Avatar

    Funny. I wrote a Haiku concerning this kind of thing earlier today. Guess we must be on the same wave length.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Absolutely, it must be something in the air. :)

      1. atothewr Avatar

        Must be. Maybe it is Spring doing it.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        :)

  5. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar

    Nice play on words here and that photo is just perfect!! Here is a challenge if you are up for it…https://cheryllynnroberts.wordpress.com/2015/03/28/love-in-ten-lines-free-verse-haiku/

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Cheryl-Lynn, I will take a look at it. :)

      1. Tournesol (Clr) Avatar

        I look forward to reading your 10 lines of Love:)

  6. rainefairy Avatar

    You got me with this post. Very impressive, Dom!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much it’s nice of you to say.

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