Gravity Defied (Tanka)

Gravity defied

As silver birds reach the skies

Takeoffs and landings

If man’s truly meant to fly

He would sprout feathers and wings

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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20 responses to “Gravity Defied (Tanka)”

  1. Steven Krohn Avatar

    Reblogged this on Eclectic Pursuits.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thanks for the re-blog Steve, I appreciate it the support. :)

  2. writersdream9 Avatar

    Great Tanka; great picture!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thanks Carol, I’m glad you liked them. :)

  3. Nicodemas Avatar

    Yes so true!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Nicodemas.

  4. words4jp Avatar

    Yes. This is true. Could you imagine if one day we woke up a set of wings. It would be cool and liberating.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      It sure would although I would be like an Ostrich since I really don’t like heights. :)

      1. words4jp Avatar

        Ostriches are beautiful – oops – handsome birds;)

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Let’s be clear here…handsome is correct. :)

      3. words4jp Avatar

        But of course. I can say you have a beautiful soul and a truly handsome set of feathers and squawk. Oh and sexy legs. Gotta love those legs!

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Well thank you especially for the leg part…my kids tell me I have chicken legs, but I think they are just jealous. :)

      5. words4jp Avatar

        :)

  5. thesewordsiwrite2012 Avatar
    thesewordsiwrite2012

    I know this is meant to be a humorous piece, but the lines ‘If man’s truly meant to fly/He would sprout feathers and wings’ got to me from an emotional standpoint. I reflected on the idea of wanting to fly away to a better place, both in location and in my life in general. Sometimes, I do feel like the caged bird in Maya Angelou’s famous poem, and I’m sure I’m not the only one who feels this way…

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I’m glad it touched you even though as you say it was meant to be a humorous piece. I sometimes wish that I too could fly away to a better place, but I suppose that it is only natural from time to time when difficulties face us. Thank you DJ for your thoughtful and personal comment, I do appreciate it.

      1. thesewordsiwrite2012 Avatar
        thesewordsiwrite2012

        And thank you for your continuing work!

  6. atothewr Avatar

    Great. It would be something if we could sprout wings and fly.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Absolutely though I’m afraid of heights, therefore I guess my wings would be clipped. :)

  7. MustardSeedBudget.wordpress.com Avatar

    such a clever photo.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I thought so…it certainly is a case of “being in the right place at the right time”.

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