Ravaged By Years

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Ravaged by the years

Bodies surrender to time

Winter of our lives

 

~~ Dominic R. DIFrancesco ~~

 

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11 responses to “Ravaged By Years”

  1. Nicodemas Avatar

    Wonderful observation Dom. I know this from when I look in a mirror!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      As do I and it’s not a pretty sight. :)

      1. Nicodemas Avatar

        :)

  2. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    An unavoidable fate. The poem really captures that.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thanks Charles, it certainly is unavoidable.

  3. writersdream9 Avatar

    Describes this well!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Carol. :)

  4. martha0stout Avatar

    Moments cherished here
    Memories written on paper
    Smiles to remember in the winter

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Very nice Martha, thank you. :)

  5. […] was reading this bit of poetry this morning on Black and Write and it inspired me to write this Haiku. Thanks Dom for the […]

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Anthony, I’m glad you found inspiration in this piece. You did a really terrific job with yours. Excellent.

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