Dressed in their finest, the mogul and his mistress approached the steps of the marble behemoth. They were running late for the gubernatorial ball and the inconvenience of the vagrant lying before them just served to infuriate.
Yelling obscenities at his still body…they did not realize he was dead.
~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
Wonderful!
Thank you very much, I really enjoyed writing it. 🙂
You did a great job!
Thank you Danica and sorry for the late reply.
A great write in few words with a powerful punch!
Thank you Oliana, I’ve been wanting to write one of these for some time and I really found it quite fun.
You did real good, Dominic, as usual!
Most powerful 50 words I’ve seen in a long time.
Thank you Tiny and I’m sorry for taking so long to respond to you.
And a poet you have become!
Thank you William, that is very nice of you to say. 🙂
You actually did it, and as always, very good writing.
Thank you Charly and sorry about taking so long to respond.
No problem, people are busy.