50 Word Story: The Vagrant

Dressed in their finest, the mogul and his mistress approached the steps of the marble behemoth.  They were running late for the gubernatorial ball and the inconvenience of the vagrant lying before them just served to infuriate.

Yelling obscenities at his still body…they did not realize he was dead.

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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14 responses to “50 Word Story: The Vagrant”

  1. DanicaPiche Avatar

    Wonderful!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, I really enjoyed writing it. :)

      1. DanicaPiche Avatar

        You did a great job!

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Thank you Danica and sorry for the late reply.

  2. Oliana Avatar

    A great write in few words with a powerful punch!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Oliana, I’ve been wanting to write one of these for some time and I really found it quite fun.

      1. Oliana Avatar

        You did real good, Dominic, as usual!

  3. Tiny Avatar

    Most powerful 50 words I’ve seen in a long time.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Tiny and I’m sorry for taking so long to respond to you.

  4. williamleeone Avatar

    And a poet you have become!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you William, that is very nice of you to say. :)

  5. charlypriest Avatar

    You actually did it, and as always, very good writing.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Charly and sorry about taking so long to respond.

      1. charlypriest Avatar

        No problem, people are busy.

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