Emotions naked
Crumpled like dirty laundry
Piled on the floor
Waiting to be gathered up
Washed, folded and put away
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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
Emotions Naked – A Tanka
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10 responses to “Emotions Naked – A Tanka”
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I have some if those currently in a basket needed to be taken downstairs ;). I love this metaphor.
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Me too. Thank you. :)
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Liked the way you played and mixed one imagery/theme with another.
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Thank you very much Eric.
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if only it were that easy to wash, fold, and put away emotions … nice thought Dominic
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Thank you very much.
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You seem to be more comfortable with these short forms. I prefer your treatment of them to the longer “Vulture” posted later. Well done. Dave
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Thank you very much, I’m very glad that you liked it.
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I love this one, it’s so “current”!
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Thank you very much, I’m glad that you liked it. :)
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Dom DiFrancesco 
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