Celestial Star – A Tanka

Celestial star

Pulse, the heartbeat of heaven

Life breath, nighttime sky

Reaching out to touch my soul

You are my cosmic lover

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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13 responses to “Celestial Star – A Tanka”

  1. Jemmy Farmer - The Boi Poet Avatar

    Ahh so!!! A lovely Tanka :)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, I appreciate that. :)

  2. Shackled and Crowned Avatar

    Very romantic Tanka, Dom. :)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much. I seem to be on a little bit of a love poetry tear right now, with the exception of my “dark” poem from a few days ago. :)

      1. Shackled and Crowned Avatar

        Lucky for you the more sensual pose the better I like it well that and anything dark

  3. sexinthekitchensink Avatar

    Reblogged this on sexinthekitchensink and commented:
    Beautiful poetry. Dominic is very talented as a poetry and writer. feel free to check out his blog-well worth a peek!!!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Wow, thank you very much that is so nice of you to say and thank you for the reblog. :)

      1. sexinthekitchensink Avatar

        Well, it is most certainly very true!!!

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Thanks again. :)

  4. words4jp Avatar

    so pretty – i love stars – so beautiful to behold and your ability to write about them makes them more beautiful:)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Kimberly, how nice of you to say. :)

  5. Lucid Gypsy Avatar

    Cosmic lover wow!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you. :)

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