Dom DiFrancesco

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Waiting – A Tanka

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I grow old waiting

Knowing you will never come

Wasting my short time

Logic tells me to move on

But hope keeps me locked in place

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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8 responses to “Waiting – A Tanka”

  1. RoSy Avatar
    RoSy

    Nice Tanka – but – oh so sad.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you RoSy, it can be sad

      Reply
  2. words4jp Avatar
    words4jp

    ahhhhh, advice i should probably consider. :)

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Sometimes we need to let go and be at peace with what we cannot change, but of course this is different for each person. Your time will come when you are ready. :)

      Reply
  3. L. Marie Avatar
    L. Marie

    Well, this is certainly an apt description of my wait to hear from the agents I queried. Sigh.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you and I’m glad you can relate. :)

      Reply
  4. LFFL Avatar
    LFFL

    I really like that one.

    Reply
    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you very much, I appreciate that.

      Reply

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