Dom DiFrancesco

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Storms Rage – A Tanka

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Storms rage with fury

Devastating destruction

Tearing limb-from-limb

Pain not invoked by nature

But by a tormented soul

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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8 responses to “Storms Rage – A Tanka”

  1. Rhonda L. Brockmeyer Avatar
    Rhonda L. Brockmeyer

    How true of the times we live in. This left me with an ick in my stomach. Great writing. Unfortunate topic.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you so much and I apologize for making you sick, that certainly wasn’t my intention. :)

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      1. Rhonda L. Brockmeyer Avatar
        Rhonda L. Brockmeyer

        Lol. Nope. You didn’t. Your topic does. A topic we all write on. :) have a wonderful day Dom.

  2. Rhonda L. Brockmeyer Avatar
    Rhonda L. Brockmeyer

    How true of the times we live in. This left me with an ick in my stomach. Great writing. Unfortunate topic.

    Reply
  3. Eric Alagan Avatar
    Eric Alagan

    For the first 3 lines, I thought it was nature. You sprung that trap very well, Dom. Good one.

    Have a great day ahead,
    Eric

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you Eric, that was my intention and I’m glad that it came across that way. You have a terrific day as well. – Dom

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  4. petitemagique Avatar
    petitemagique

    True words, Dom, and greatly written!
    Lots of love to you

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you Patty so very nice of you to say. I hope all is well with you my friend. – Dom

      Reply

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