Tears For Me – A Tanka

Sky-born droplets stream

Through riverbeds of life

Soaking to the skin

Looking towards heaven above

Awestruck…are these tears for me

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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4 responses to “Tears For Me – A Tanka”

  1. Rhonda Avatar

    I really like this Dom, the question…the pause. Really beautiful.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much, I like how this one turned out, everything just fell into place. :)

  2. Adriannetu Avatar

    Hi, I read “Tears for Me.” Great Tanka! Wonderful imagery of rainy-day blues. Read one of my poems: http://adriannetu.wordpress.com/2013/07/21/the-smell-of-money/

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, I loved your poem and I appreciate you visiting mine. :)

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