Dark Closet

Its a dark closet,

Door shut,

Bolt fixed,

Lock turned.

Reaching above the door frame,

Skeleton key missing.

Clanging of metal tells the tale.

You’ve locked yourself inside,

Stolen the key.

Don’t you want rescue,

To be saved,

Freed from this dungeon?

In an instant

Lights go out.

No sign of life beneath locked door.

All is quite,

Retreating to the recesses of your mind.

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

Comments

14 responses to “Dark Closet”

  1. Roxi St. Clair Avatar

    Been there, done that, lost the key decades before! Glad to have company ;-)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      You most certainly aren’t alone, not only have I lost my key, but also my marbles. :)

      1. Roxi St. Clair Avatar

        Wow you had marbles??? I never even had marbles to begin with… (pouting) LOL

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I guess I did, but since I lost my mind, I really can’t remember. By the way, if you happen to come across any of my marbles I would appreciate getting them back. :)

      3. Roxi St. Clair Avatar

        but… but… even the aggie?? it’s soooooo pretty (bottom lip quivering)

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Okay…okay, you can keep the aggie if it means that much to you, I don’t want to make you cry…I don’t deal with crying very well. LOL! :)

      5. Roxi St. Clair Avatar

        Okay I’ll keep the aggie, but trade you for my yo-yo… I suck at yo-yo’ing anyway LOL

      6. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Sounds like a fair trade to me, I always loved the yo-yo…I think the first thing I will do is “Walk-the-Dog”. :)

  2. Oloriel Avatar

    Great writing! It reminded me of a song by “Alice in Chains”.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, I glad that you enjoyed it. :)

  3. tiny lessons blog Avatar

    That’s what can happen. Loved this one!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, unfortunately it occurs way too often with devastating effects.

  4. words4jp Avatar

    i personally like my closet – it is safe in there and i do not have to let anyone in. but you are right – it is dark and the darkness gets tiring at times. xx

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I don’t dislike my closet either, I have to have someplace to put my stuff. :)

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