Will I…

Were I cast out to sea, adrift…in a small boat,

Floating…gliding up and down over diamond-head swells;

Bathing under a star soaked sky,

Will I be seen by God?

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Were I crawling, dirty…clothes worn ragged,

Parched…flesh burning, blistered and bleeding;

Boiled under a hellish sun,

Will I be saved by God?

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Were I bedridden, covered in sores…begging for death,

Terminal…no hope, living in utter despair;

A slave to this mortal body,

Will I be spared by God?

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Were I to pass…peacefully or in torment,

Eyes closed…draped in white as I was at birth;

No more a victim to my earthly form,

Will I be welcomed by God?

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For all the wrongs I’ve done, all the sins I have notched,

The list is long, written in stone, my autobiography;

My claim on humanity not unlike others,

Will I be forgiven by God?

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Will I be seen…

Will I be saved…

Will I be spared…

Will I be welcomed…

Will I be forgiven…

By God?

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

Comments

10 responses to “Will I…”

  1. WB Avatar

    Powerful.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much sir.

  2. Morgan Avatar

    Very nice…felt like I was there!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I very glad, thank you so much.

  3. sassybookworm Avatar
    sassybookworm

    I really like this poem, particularly due to the use of God as it adds great depth and emotion and the question at the end is so powerful. Also, thank you for dropping by my blog – I really appreciate it!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I so glad that you liked it, I write about God and various other forms of spirituality quite frequently. It was my pleasure to read your blog and thank you for stopping by and reading mine. I appreciate it very much.

  4. words4jp Avatar

    these are tough questions – yes, I agree with WB – very powerful. I do not believe we will ever know the answer, until we reach our end.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      That is for sure, although I certainly am not trying rush into finding out…I kind of like it here. :)

  5. Blog It Or Lose It Avatar

    Powerfully aching and pleading —
    Great poem Dom

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Jen, I really enjoyed writing this one. :)

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