The Tender Shiver (Tanka)

The tender shiver
From an early snows caress
Like first kiss passion
Stoked with anxious excitement
Culminates in inner peace
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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

Comments

8 responses to “The Tender Shiver (Tanka)”

  1. WB Avatar

    I really like the way you word your content. Great piece.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you WB, I appreciate your kind comment.

  2. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

    Gosh that’s nice!!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much my friend. :)

  3. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

    Reblogged this on Traces of the Soul and commented:
    Gosh this is so nice!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you for the reblog, it is much appreciated.

  4. Pamela Beckford Avatar

    Reblogged this on Poetry by Pamela and commented:
    I have come to love the tanka. And this is a great example.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much Pamela, I love them as well and as you know they can be harder to write than they look. :)

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