Sedentarianism O’ Vile Beast

Sedentarianism O’ vile beast

Claiming many for gluttonous feast

Aches and pains we blame on age

Are nothing more than inactivities stage

Still we deny this is of our doing

Instead we choose to settle stewing

Looking to man and brew of witches

Falling for promises of curing pitches

With blinders on we grow ever fatter

Thinking the pills will solve what matters

When simply moving would do a world of good

Just as we always knew we should

Until it’s too late the damage is done

The beast–Sedentary, his battle won

Leads to the inevitable early grave

When so easily our death we could have stave

Were it not for this lazy and slippery foe

Run–or walk while you can its time to go

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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Prompt: Rest breeds rust – German Proverb – It’s Friday Prompt by Jeremy Farmer  at  Jeremy’s Daily Challenge

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17 responses to “Sedentarianism O’ Vile Beast”

  1. Journey In Rhyme Avatar

    Great message in today’s world! Accurate.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much, I think that it is, but prompt really got me thinking about how prevalent it really is.

  2. Mirada Avatar
    Mirada

    Ohhh, you’re preachin’ to me, Dom! My walking program begins tomorrow, March 1st–I’m SO NOT looking forward to it, though I know I’ll feel tons better once I get a couple weeks under my belt (what belt? it’s all blubber bound by elastic). So, I’m taking your post as a helpful reminder from God of “our deal”–thanks!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Me too, I have finally gotten back on my exercise program and believe me it makes all the difference. I’m sure you will do great. :)

      1. Mirada Avatar
        Mirada

        Waiting for a weather break to prompt me–thanks for your encouragement!

  3. meticulousmick Avatar

    Very well said Dominic, MM 🍀

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you my friend. :)

  4. Lucid Gypsy Avatar

    I know many who need to grapple with this beast and sometimes struggle a tad myself :-)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Oh, I do as well, I’ve spent the last year trying to get control of it. :)

  5. Briana Vedsted Avatar

    This is an incredible piece of poetry! Fantastic!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much Briana, I have the prompt to thank for it. :)

  6. Tiny Avatar

    A great reminder!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you, without the prompt I probably would never have written this one, but I did enjoy writing it none-the-less. :)

  7. Jeremy Farmer Avatar

    I can really identify with this Dom, I took a few days out of my work out schedule and oh the muscles ache this morning. Nice take on the prompt!!!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much and thank you for the great prompt I really enjoyed writing from it. :)

  8. lumar1298 Avatar

    This is great… Love it… We should try, but some of us don’t succeed…

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Oh I have failed so many times this was not meant as an indictment, but just a view on the state of modern societies. This is as much about me as anyone that is for sure. :)

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