Brilliant Stars (Shadorma)

Brilliant stars

A sliver of moon

Magical

Perfection

I can see heaven from earth

What could be better

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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17 responses to “Brilliant Stars (Shadorma)”

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much for the award, I truly appreciate it my friend. :)

  1. Lucid Gypsy Avatar

    Lovely imagery I can see it all clearly.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, it was such a beautiful clear night.

  2. Bastet Avatar

    Beautiful Shadorma! Love moon scenes!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, this is the first one of these that I’ve done. Jen over at blogitorloseit.com was my inspiration for giving it a try. :)

      1. Bastet Avatar

        And I inspired Jen….did you know that we’re putting up a weekly shadorma prompt at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie…I love to see you participate with one of your shadorma…you picked it up immediately! Georgia ;-)

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Thank you my friend, then I owe you a debt of gratitude as well for inspiring me to write a shadorma. I will check out Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie and would love to participate in the weekly prompt. Thank you for letting me know about it and for the nice compliment. :)

      3. Bastet Avatar

        Oh…thanks and I’ll be so happy to see your shadorma! Once on’s into haiku…the other little ones are so easy! :-)

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I am working on some right now. :)

      5. Bastet Avatar

        lol! Great! They’ve come up with another short poem over at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai…an Elfje…this one from Holland…11 lines first line either one word or one syllable usually a color or sensation…then 2-3-4-1 … either syllables or words. Cool but a little strait-jackety…

      6. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        That one might be a little much for me, I think I will have to pass on that one. I am close enough to wearing a straight-jacket as it is that this form might just put me over the edge. :)

      7. Bastet Avatar

        Oh I’m hearing you! :-) It was just info…one never knows, but I guess I didn’t give it really great press.

  3. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Those are the nights that make a person want to stay awake.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Absolutely. :)

  4. lumar1298 Avatar

    Nothing gets better than that… Lor,

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Agreed! :)

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