Dom DiFrancesco

Musings of an Aspiring Author and Poet

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Life! What Do You Want (Tanka)

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Life! What do you want

Beating me up ‘til I cry

Then knocking me down

Expecting me to thank you

How about if I refuse!

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

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6 responses to “Life! What Do You Want (Tanka)”

  1. Victor Terrien Avatar
    Victor Terrien

    Very well-said. :)

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you very much Victor.

      Reply
  2. Charles Yallowitz Avatar
    Charles Yallowitz

    Wow. Love the power and bite of this poem.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thanks Charles. :)

      Reply
  3. Anna Belfrage Avatar
    Anna Belfrage

    No choice but to get back up, though…

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      That’s for sure…I’m not real fond of the alternative. :)

      Reply

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