Play To The Senses (Tanka)

Play to the senses

Sights and sounds stir in the mind

Like a poor man’s soup

Drawn from life experience

That only I could have lived

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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9 responses to “Play To The Senses (Tanka)”

  1. writersdream9 Avatar

    Short and so very sweet!!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much. :)

  2. Jonathan Caswell Avatar

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    HE’S NOT “BOWLED OVER” BY HIS POOR MAN’S SOUP…IS HE? :) GOOD TANKA—EXCELLENT POET!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thanks Jonathan, my head grows larger with every compliment…but hey, don’t stop I kind of like it. :)

      1. Jonathan Caswell Avatar

        NOT SURPRISING…..your compliments do that to me, too!

  3. words4jp Avatar

    Wonderful. xx

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Kimberly, you know that I appreciate it. :)

  4. martha0stout Avatar

    Mmmm…soup.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      One of my favorites. :)

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