November 26, 2014 Blue Skies And Fair Winds (Senryu) 6 Comments Blue skies and fair winds Pure harmony of nature A lesson to learn ~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~ Share this:TwitterFacebookPinterestRedditEmailPrintLike this:Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Inspirational, Poetry, Spiritual Tagged: brotherhood, happiness, harmony, humanity, joy, kindness, love, peace, synchronicity
I suppose that it could be either one, there was the opening with nature, but I attempted to related to the human condition. Perhaps I was wrong to call it a senryu. Now I’m not sure what it should have been. 🙂 Reply
Dom DiFrancesco 
Perfect haiku, ticks all the boxes!
Thank you so much Gilly, you are probably right in calling it a haiku.
Oh I see I got that wrong its a senryu!
I suppose that it could be either one, there was the opening with nature, but I attempted to related to the human condition. Perhaps I was wrong to call it a senryu. Now I’m not sure what it should have been. 🙂
Harmony is indeed a lesson to learn. Beautiful.
Thank you Tiny, I very much enjoyed writing this one. 🙂