Sleep Is But A Pit (Tanka)

Sleep is but a pit

Black, void of anything real

What is all the hype

Dreams do not exist for all

Some simply sleep in darkness

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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10 responses to “Sleep Is But A Pit (Tanka)”

  1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Good point. Then again, is it possible people simply don’t remember their dreams?

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I suppose that it is. I wrote this one from my own experiences. There was a time that I did at least remember the occasional dream, but that was a long time ago, I have not remembered a single one in many many years. I just find it very strange.

      1. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Same here. Wonder why we start losing the ability to hold onto those as we get older.

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Well I guess the mind is the first thing to go at least in my case. :)

      3. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        Mine too. Not sure if that’s better or worse than the body going first.

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I guess in the end it all ends in the same place. :)

  2. chrisrenney Avatar

    And live in it too.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Indeed, thank you Chris. :)

  3. Ellar Wise Avatar

    Hi Dom. Yes, sleep is a pit, which is why, in the Greek mythology, Hypnos, god of sleep, and Thanatos, god of death, were twins

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Hello Ellar, I was unaware of that, it does make sense. Thank you my friend.

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