April 21, 2015 Shaken From a Dream (Senryu) 8 Comments Shaken from a dream Reality seems blurred Which of them is real . ~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~ Share this:TwitterFacebookPinterestRedditEmailPrintLike this:Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Poetry Tagged: awake, blur, dream state, dreams, haiku, reality, sleep
Sometimes I think the borderline between the two is so thin… How sure are we that we are not asleep? 🙂
I love the form and structure. It punches and gives much to munch on. Well done Sir!
I apologize for not responding to your comment in a timely fashion. I was going through my spam comments and yours wound up in there. Anyway, I agree, the line is very thin indeed and therefore how can any of us be sure that we are not asleep. Well said sir, thank you.
Thank you, Sir.
Sometimes, it is hard to know for sure.
Absolutely, I think we forget that we are all human.
Got me thinking.. Can’t stop the thoughts now..
I’m glad, it is nice when poetry does that. Thank you for saying so. 🙂