A Cape Of Thorns Worn (Tanka)

Prickly Pear Cactus in bloom.  Image Credit: www.bhg.com
Prickly Pear Cactus in bloom.
Image Credit: http://www.bhg.com

A cape of thorns worn

Crown of pink its head adorned

Desert grown jewel

Prickly Pear Her Majesty

There is beauty in this beast

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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18 responses to “A Cape Of Thorns Worn (Tanka)”

  1. Lucid Gypsy Avatar

    Very clever!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much. :)

  2. parmis rad Avatar

    We had these desert cacti my parents yard. You write so well and I always enjoy reading your work.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so very much. The are painful when contacted, but very beautiful when they flower. I appreciate your kind comment.

  3. Lyrical Treasure Avatar

    The words describe the picture perfectly… very clever indeed, Dom. :-)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, many people don’t realize just how beautiful their flowers are. :)

  4. Just Patty Avatar

    Greatly written Dom! I always love your Tanka’s.
    Hugz

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much Patty. Hugs to you my friend. :)

  5. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

    Always wondered why it’s called a prickly pear.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I;m not really sure other than its fins are sort of pear shaped. All I know is that the needles on the prickly pear are ultra-fine and exceptionally painful and hard to remove. Their flowers however, are very beautiful.

    2. Ellespeth Avatar

      it’s called prickly pear because of it’s fruit – who’d get near it to pick it? I’ve seen people picking the fruit, though.
      Ellespeth

      1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        We purchased one a few years ago and placed it in between the seats of our van to keep it from falling over, unfortunately my wife wasn’t paying attention and while leaning over to get something out the back she ran across the top of it with her chest. She had so many needles in her that it made her sick and it took a very long time for them to all come out (beyond what we could see and pull out). I guess that at least gives it the “prickly” part of its name.

      2. Charles Yallowitz Avatar

        I assume thick gloves and a careful touch would help.

      3. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Gloves are certainly mandatory and a careful touch certainly wouldn’t hurt. :)

  6. Janelle Avatar
    Janelle

    Lovely!!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much, I appreciate that. :)

  7. Ellespeth Avatar

    I’m slowly working my way through your blog – starting with your poems.
    This cactus is growing in an empty lot near us – as you say, in your poem, a beast..but so lovely in full bloom.
    I did enjoy this one…
    Ellespeth

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much Ellespeth, I’m so glad that you did. :)

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